Kazuki – Friday Fictioneers

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It’s Friday Fictioneers time! The challenge is to write 100 words based on a weekly photo prompt chosen by our host Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Check out her blog for more information by clicking here. Thank you to all who take the time to read, like, or comment.

2017-01-20

PHOTO PROMPT © Dale Rogerson

Kazuki

In the Corridor of Reflection, hope lay dying.

The Elders had marvelled at the boy, abandoned at the doors of The Tower eleven solar cycles previously. They immediately saw his potential and named him Kazuki. He would grow to save them all; save the world.

But they failed him: never warning him to be wary of the monster with the green eyes, who wears a man’s face; never considering a fellow Fledgling would conceal such resentment in their heart or a knife within their robes.

In the Corridor of Reflection, a river ran crimson.

Elsewhere, a monster reflected, well satisfied.

8 responses to “Kazuki – Friday Fictioneers”

  1. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Wow, great story… gripping!

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  2. Kecia Sparlin Avatar

    Sad this story is too often played out, the loss of potential to violence. Well told.

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  3. neilmacdon Avatar

    I guess the world wasn’t saved after all then.

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  4. Ashley Danielle Avatar
    Ashley Danielle

    Very sinister. I like it! For once there was no happy ending, just continued sorrow.

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  5. Dale Avatar
    Dale

    Well done!

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  6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Ouch… hope might die like that.

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  7. Life Lessons of a Dog Lover Avatar
    Life Lessons of a Dog Lover

    Great imagery. Great writing.

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  8. Michael Wynn Avatar

    Very gripping story, if only they’d warned him

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