Always – Friday Fictioneers

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It’s Friday Fictioneers time! The challenge is to write 100 words based on a weekly photo prompt chosen by our host Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Check out her blog for more information by clicking here. An unusually hectic social life, university deadlines and the stress of job hunting means that I am few weeks behind reading all the stories from my fellow Fictioneers. I will try to catch up. Thank you to all who continue to take the time to read, like or comment on mine!

2016 08 05

PHOTO PROMPT © Ted Strutz

Always

There is always a bar.

Always a barmaid whose face I won’t remember.

Always a full wallet, a full bottle, an empty wallet, an empty bottle.

The first sip burns, like French kissing molten lava, but it’s good to feel something. Boy, you couldn’t buy that kind of warmth from a thousand whores.

I’ve had enough when my face goes numb but I don’t stop until I no longer recognise that face in the bathroom mirror: What’re you looking at pal?

Tomorrow’s another day. A clean slate. A chance to resurrect, revitalise, rejuvenate.

Failing that, there is always a bar.

 

12 responses to “Always – Friday Fictioneers”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    The sad angry voice in this is terrific.

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thanks Neil.

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  2. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Thom,

    You had me at French kissing molten lava. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Haha! Thanks Rochelle! I’m glad you liked that line!

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  3. MrBinks Avatar
    MrBinks

    Brilliant. Really powerful and emotional. Well done.

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thanks!

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  4. gahlearner Avatar
    gahlearner

    This is great, such desperation and anger. Great writing.

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it!

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  5. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    He’d better watch out for the gutter.🙂

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      It’s a slippery slope! Thanks for reading and commenting Michael.

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  6. The Reclining Gentleman Avatar

    Very well told. The ever-optimistic thought that tomorrow will be a new beginning, combined with the ever-present realisation that it will be just the same.

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thanks TRG! Glad you enjoyed it.

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