The Fall

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The Fall

With intransigent views, in disorderly queues 
you march towards the final fall. 
I don’t discriminate, but swallow all:
both creator and devourer.
Behind invented faiths you cower.
“In the next life we’ll know unconditional love. 
None to judge, save He above.”
Why wait? Was it so fucking hard,
to not kill each other over what sets you apart?
If ‘He’ ever existed, he left years ago,
abandoning you to ‘She’ below.
She, who raised you up from primordial jelly,
now finds herself with a rumbling belly.
A fitting epitaph to the Human Race:
“Just like chicken”
(with a bitter aftertaste).

Written in response to Friday Fictioneers, a weekly 100-word writing challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-FieldsCome and play along!

8 responses to “The Fall”

  1. Dale Avatar

    Nicely done.

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  2. msjadeli Avatar

    Reads like a well-deserved epitaph. We haven’t done a very good job have we 😦

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  3. Margaret Avatar

    The tone here suits your purpose very well. I can hear the anger. I like the sounds in this – the end rhymes and rhythm work well.

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  4. Michael B. Fishman Avatar

    A powerful poem. It deserves more views.

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  5. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Thomas,

    The last line made me laugh out loud.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  6. The Sicilian Storyteller Avatar

    Oh man! You sure said a mouthful! Well done.

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    1. Thomas Charles Henry Avatar

      Thank you!

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  7. schmidlinjana84 Avatar

    wow!! 72The Signs

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