Hideaway

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Hideaway

As the deluge curtails our escape plans, we seek shelter within a dense copse of trees like children playing hideaway. The storm rages against the world and so do you; both having age-old scores to settle. I fear neither, knowing both will calm in time.ย 

Morning comes. I watch the sunโ€™s viridescent rays sneak through our protective canopy to dance playfully across your sleeping face, softening the worry lines I know so well.

โ€œI think I love you,โ€ I whisper. You do not stir. The eager breeze promises to keep my secret, but gossips with the leaves as it passes.

Written in response to Friday Fictioneers, a weekly 100-word writing challenge hosted byย Rochelle Wisoff-Fields.ย Come and play along!

10 responses to “Hideaway”

  1. elmowrites Avatar

    Aw, lovely. I adore the breeze gossiping with the leaves. There’s a lot of potential here.

    Jen

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  2. neilmacdon Avatar

    A secret never to be uttered again, perhaps

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  3. Dale Avatar

    This was such a delightful read, Thomas.โ€‚I read it twice, just because!

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    1. Thomas Charles Henry Avatar

      What a lovely comment! Thank you, Dale. You can read it as many times as you like! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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      1. Dale Avatar

        ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  4. granonine Avatar

    Oh, I have questions!โ€‚This was not a young couple, was it?โ€‚What was she raging against? How had life hurt her?โ€‚I looked up viridescent, which means what I thought, so I don’t have to ask that question :)โ€‚Why did his love for her have to stay a secret?

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  5. Angela Avatar

    Lovely language. I agree with Granonine…so many directions you could explore here!

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  6. msjadeli Avatar

    Lovely prose! Shows a lot of insight into human nature.

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  7. Sandra Avatar

    No better way to pass the storm.

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  8. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Thomas,

    What a lovely, well-written piece. I enjoyed it.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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