Eldridge

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Eldridge

Eldridge was, as expected, in the tallest room of the tower. Exhausted, Benn wondered why the old man made this climb every day. 

The books are here, it’s peaceful, and the birds visita voice in their head answered.

“I’m sorry magic found you so late,” Benn blurted, embarrassed by the abrupt statement.

“Dear child,” Eldridge looked up in surprise. “Do not be sorry about that. I am simply delighted that it found me at all.”

“I hope it finds me someday.”

Eldridge gestured to the books and smiled. Galaxies swirled within his eyes.

“Have you tried searching for it?”

Written in response to Friday Fictioneers, a weekly 100-word writing challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-FieldsCome and play along!

7 responses to “Eldridge”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    There is magic of all sorts there

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  2. Iain Kelly Avatar

    Love this. Books are magic indeed.

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  3. thisobscurelife Avatar

    seek and ye shall find! Books and stories are indeed magic.

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  4. msjadeli Avatar

    Interesting story.

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  5. Margaret Avatar

    I’m drawn right into the world of these two characters. You took me into that tower with old Eldridge, and up the staircase with young Benn. This is great.

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  6. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Thomas,

    I love the character you’ve created in a few words. New worlds for Benn to explore indeed. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  7. Angela Avatar

    This is great! I love Eldridge’s delight that magic found him, not regretting that it came late.

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