Leo

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Leo

“Cut that out! It’s disgusting!”

I took another drag, the flame’s progress mirroring that of the encroaching tide.

“I’m having a melancholic moment,” I replied. “Like Leonardo DiCaprio in Romeo and Juliet.”

He howled with laughter.

“Oh, so you Leo now? Motherfucker was 20 in that movie (not to mention the most beautiful twink who ever lived). Honey, you a 50-year-old queen who should know better. What’s the plan? Be sad forever? You tried that: shit happened anyway. Let’s have some fun. Tequila! I’m buying.”

“I’m 36,” I protested.

He ran off, cackling.

I trudged after him, still smoking.

Written in response to Friday Fictioneers, a weekly 100-word writing challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-FieldsCome and play along!

19 responses to “Leo”

  1. Margaret Avatar

    We all need to have our ‘moments’ in our own way. I think he needs to find a more uplifting friend, though. I like the interplay between these two characters. Well told.

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    1. Thomas Charles Henry Avatar

      Thank you, Margaret!

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  2. neilmacdon Avatar

    I like the voice in this

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    1. Thomas Charles Henry Avatar

      Thank you, Neil!

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  3. msjadeli Avatar

    Reminds me of Jon Voight and Dustin Hoffman in Midnight Cowboy if they had gotten to FL. Good writing.

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    1. Thomas Charles Henry Avatar

      Thank you!

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re very welcome.

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  4. Sandra Avatar

    Great voice

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    1. Thomas Charles Henry Avatar

      Thank you, Sandra!

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  5. The Sicilian Storyteller Avatar

    I have to say it as well: excellent voice. Love the back and forth between these two. Great read, Thomas.

    ~ Nancy

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    1. Thomas Charles Henry Avatar

      Thank you, Nancy. It was a fun one to write!

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  6. Michael B. Fishman Avatar

    Melancholic moments are good for the soul. This guy needs a new friend.

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    1. Thomas Charles Henry Avatar

      We all need friends who know when to let us be and when to lift us up! Thanks for your comment, Michael.

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  7. Heather Musk Avatar

    A good response to the prompt, thank you.

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    1. Thomas Charles Henry Avatar

      Thank you, Heather!

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  8. Angela Avatar

    Great characterization of both in such a short piece! Excellent voices too.

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    1. Thomas Charles Henry Avatar

      Thank you, Angela!

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  9. thisobscurelife Avatar

    I’m 36

    He ran off cackiling

    I felt like I was there in this moment cackling with them. So good.

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    1. Thomas Charles Henry Avatar

      Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it!

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