The Path (Excerpt) – Friday Fictioneers

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Hello. It’s time for another Friday Fictioneers. The challenge is to write a 100-word story in response to a weekly photo prompt chosen by our host Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Follow the link to her blog for more information. Thank you to all who take the time to read, like, or comment.

I’ll admit, I had far too much fun with this one! The story I wrote was over 600 words. However, I am an ardent follower of the rules, so what follows is a 100-word excerpt. If you wish to read the whole thing, please click here.

2020 01 31

PHOTO PROMPT © Dale Rogerson

The Path (Excerpt)

“What am I looking at?”

“Your life,” he replied. “Or perhaps more appropriately, the path of your life.

The path snaked around in a figure of eight formation, calling to mind the image of Ouroboros. It was surrounded on all sides by snowdrifts.

“Do I ever vary my course?”

“As a rule, most people don’t. It isn’t easy to jump the curve. Your journey rarely differs, and the final destination is always the same.” Then, like a carnival worker preparing to punch another hole into my wristband, he cocked his head and asked: “Are you ready to go around again?”

4 responses to “The Path (Excerpt) – Friday Fictioneers”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    And yet, while we’re making them, our journeys seem so random to us

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  2. Lynn Love Avatar

    This highlights what’s important about life – we fool ourselves it’s the destination (a good job/house/car/wealth) but really, life is all about the journey. Intriguing take on the prompt

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  3. granonine Avatar

    Round and round we go. . . it is indeed hard to vary the course, once it is set. Good story!

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  4. msjadeli Avatar

    I’d like to know the setting and who is doing the talking. It could be an enchantment. Cosmic ouroboros is better than a cliff scenario!

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