Sirens – Friday Fictioneers

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Hello. It’s time for another Friday Fictioneers entry. The challenge is to write a 100-word story in response to a weekly photo prompt chosen by our host Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Follow the link to her blog for more information. Thank you to all who take the time to read, like, or comment.

2019 05 17

PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

Sirens

“I don’t have my swimsuit.”

“Neither do we.”

I sensed a trap but realised it was the truth. The water lapped at their bare skin, whilst cunningly distorting the view of all that I so desperately wanted to see.

I swayed slightly, thoughts muddled; drowning in the too-hot, too-close, and too-loud environment that singularly defines an indoor swimming pool.

“Are you coming in?”

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Later, I tried to reason that fleeing had been heroic: I’d resisted the Sirens.

In a parallel universe, another version of me had dived right in, probably to their doom. Those bastards have all the fun.

6 responses to “Sirens – Friday Fictioneers”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    Great evocation of the atmosphere of a swimming pool

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  2. Susan A Eames Avatar

    Like this! Very thought provoking.

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    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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  3. Iain Kelly Avatar

    He did well to resist – this time!

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  4. msjadeli Avatar

    Modern spin on an old tale and very well-adapted!

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  5. granonine Avatar

    Well, now we have a sprite AND some sirens. Mythology is alive and well 🙂 Great take on an old story.

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  6. Abhijit Ray Avatar
    Abhijit Ray

    Not jumping into an indoor pool without swimsuit! A good decision.

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