Bad influences – Friday Fictioneers

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Time for another Friday Fictioneers entry! The challenge is to write a 100-word story in response to a weekly photo prompt chosen by our host Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Follow the link to her blog for more information. Thank you to all who take the time to read, like, or comment.

2018 07 13

PHOTO PROMPT © Liz Young

Bad influences

Mama never heard the monster, but she saw the results of its tutelage and she wasn’t impressed. She beat him; warned him to stay away from ‘bad influences’.

So he locked the monster up and threw away the key.

Now Mama was gone.

The day she got sick he heard a distant clanging; a rattling of metal bars. The volume increased incessantly until the day of the cremation.

She’s gone, a voice chuckled. But I’m still here. I can protect you.

Just let me out.

He removed the lid from the urn. Amongst the ashes lay a rusty, iron key.

5 responses to “Bad influences – Friday Fictioneers”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    Such a good chiller, Thomas

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  2. jillyfunnell Avatar

    You are telling a much broader story here. I really like the use of the key. Well done.

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  3. lisarey1990 Avatar

    Very chilling. Great read.

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  4. Iain Kelly Avatar

    I agree, chilling indeed.

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  5. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    A powerful story, I can only hope the key jams.

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