Repeaters – Friday Fictioneers

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Time for another Friday Fictioneers entry! The challenge is to write a 100-word story in response to a weekly photo prompt chosen by our host Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Follow the link to her blog for more information. Thank you to all who take the time to read, like, or comment.

2018 03 31

PHOTO PROMPT © Fatima Fakier Deria

Repeaters

The first one I saw was a woman. She emerged from the woods sobbing in relief. After a while she became agitated: pacing around the treeline as if looking for someone, before reluctantly going back in.

There are six in total: old friends who met for a reunion meal. We call them ‘Repeaters’. It’s kinder than the alternative, and they might not even be dead. The man didn’t seem to be.

“Hold tight to your friends and don’t lose track of time,” he said, looking through me but not at me. “Or one day time might lose track of you.”

3 responses to “Repeaters – Friday Fictioneers”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    That holodeck needs a repair

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  2. pennygadd51 Avatar

    Now that’s really chilling. You’ve written a genuinely disturbing story, Thomas. Well done!

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  3. jillyfunnell Avatar

    Mysterious and disturbing. Very well written.

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