Awakening – Friday Fictioneers

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Time for another Friday Fictioneers entry! The challenge is to write a 100-word story in response to a weekly photo prompt chosen by our host Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Follow the link to her blog for more information. Thank you to all who take the time to read, like, or comment.

2018 03 09

PHOTO PROMPT © Sandra Crook

Awakening

The Guardians protected this place during the earliest wars; fought between gods, not men. After the truce, they patrolled the water’s edge lest conflict return. There they remain, hardened by time.

The stone relics seemed mightily unimpressive: another of Ma’s fairy stories. Brigid aimed a dismissive kick at the nearest, then froze. Had she imagined the pulse of light that radiated from it? Reality swam away, leaving her in a bubble. She reached for the relic, needing to feel solid stone against her fingers.

Brigid!

The membrane popped. She reeled back. Sky filled her vision before water flooded over her.

19 responses to “Awakening – Friday Fictioneers”

  1. Dale Avatar
    Dale

    That was wild! I loved it…

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thanks Dale! Much appreciated!

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  2. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Not stone at all! Crazy. Really enjoyed this

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thanks Laurie! Glad you enjoyed it!

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  3. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    What a fun piece – fantastic!

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thank you Keith. It was a difficult one to get right this week – it took a lot of redrafting! I’m glad it was worth it!

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  4. granonine Avatar

    Don’t mess with the cairns!

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  5. Thom Carswell Avatar
    Thom Carswell

    Don’t indeed! Thanks for reading!

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  6. draliman Avatar

    Sounds like Ma knew what she was talking about after all. Nice one!

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thank you!

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  7. Lynn Love Avatar

    Well, Brigid is either about to enjoy the adventure of a lifetime or … Don’t mess with the Guardians … Impressive inclusion of a complex myth in such a small word count – well done Thom

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thanks Lynn! Much appreciated!

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      1. Lynn Love Avatar

        My pleasure Thom

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  8. athling2001 Avatar

    So much said in so few words. Well done. I hope Brigid is off to an adventure and not something else.

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thank you! I think adventure awaits!

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  9. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

    I’ve always wondered about stone monuments. Really, what does lurk within? Nicely captured.

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thanks Alicia!

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  10. rgayer55 Avatar

    You left us in mid-air. Well done.

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  11. Thom Carswell Avatar
    Thom Carswell

    Quite literally, for a moment at least! Thanks Russell!

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