Pause – Friday Fictioneers

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It’s Friday Fictioneers time! The challenge is to write a 100-word story in response to a weekly photo prompt chosen by our host Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Follow the link to her blog for more information. Thank you to all who take the time to read, like, or comment.

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PHOTO PROMPT © Sarah Ann Hall

Pause

Have you ever knocked over a vase? There’s a moment, just before it hits the ground, when time stops. It’s a barely perceptible phenomenon: the briefest pause; a state of absolute clarity at the tipping point between cause and effect.

The same thing happens when you destroy your life. You might set the events in motion years earlier: the feelings you repress, the anger you let burn, the one last drink you always have. The vase can fall for a very long time. In the pause before it shatters you see everything clearly, and spend eternity picking up the pieces.

10 responses to “Pause – Friday Fictioneers”

  1. Iain Kelly Avatar

    Deep. I like it.

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  2. neilmacdon Avatar

    Just lovely

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  3. rgayer55 Avatar

    I saw a car rollover when I was about sixteen. I swear it happened in slow motion. A blonde girl with long hair was driving. The memory of seeing it swirl around her head while she screamed will forever be etched in my brain. Fortunately, she was not badly hurt, but it scared the shit out of me at the time.

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  4. spicedmullings Avatar

    Profound yet so simple. Life is indeed a precious vase. I do know of a Master Craftsman Who can put it together again!

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  5. granonine Avatar

    Excellent analogy. Great take on the prompt.

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  6. Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist Avatar

    Life and broken glass. Both can shatter only with one it is easier to pick up the pieces. Good piece.

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  7. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Great analogy, Thom. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  8. Kelvin M. Knight's blog Avatar

    And the beauty of this is it happens all the time. Didn’t the greeks have a special word for this type of time…

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  9. Norma Avatar

    Great analogy. Very deep. Loved your take on the prompt.

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  10. Dale Avatar
    Dale

    I love this. And it is so true. Like time is suspended…. till the crash brings you back to the present.

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