Siren Lake – Friday Fictioneers

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It’s Friday Fictioneers time! The challenge is to write 100 words based on a weekly photo prompt chosen by our host, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Check out her blog for more information by clicking here. Thank you to all who take the time to read, like or comment.

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Siren Lake

For years after his wife had passed away, with their daughter asleep in bed, he would sneak down to Siren Lake: where this world is reflected in the next. There his wife would be waiting, smiling beneath water still as glass. Often she would reach out to him, beckoning him to join her. With tears in his eyes, he would always refuse.

When fever cruelly took their daughter, he found her with her mother: reflected in Siren Lake. Both smiled and reached out to him. Finally ready, he took their hands in his and allowed himself to be pulled under.

16 responses to “Siren Lake – Friday Fictioneers”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    “where this world is reflected in the next” is a lovely image

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thanks Neil

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  2. nonsmokingladybug Avatar

    I loved it very much. “Finally ready to be pulled under.” Great writing.

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thank you!

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  3. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Wow… This is an emotional one. How sad but in the end they are all together, that would be a hard thing to say no to. I’m not surprised that he chose to go in the end

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thanks Laurie. Glad you enjoyed it.

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  4. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    Sad images of how love effects the bereaved. Well writen

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      Thom Carswell

      Thanks Michael

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  5. The Writer's Village Avatar

    gentle and loving and sad love story….

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      Thom Carswell

      Thank you!

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  6. aliciajamtaas Avatar

    I enjoyed where you took the reflections in the water. Sometimes it’s hard to carry on after those you love most are gone. Well done.

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thanks Alicia

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  7. ahtdoucette Avatar

    What a beautiful image, this lake. I’d definitely like to read more about this one.

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      Thom Carswell

      Thank you!

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  8. Felicia Hf Avatar
    Felicia Hf

    Wow, a powerful tale you wrote. Terribly sad, but perhaps it’s a good thing he doesn’t have to suffer losing the two of them…

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    1. Thom Carswell Avatar
      Thom Carswell

      Thanks Felicia

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