The Miller – Friday Fictioneers

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2016-09-16

PHOTO PROMPT © Shaktiki Sharma

The Miller

I hate that skeletons are always grinning: like they are glad it’s all over and find it funny that the rest of us have to keep going. Some joke.

This one was different. It had taken the whole morning to gain access to the mill. When I finally breached the barricade I found the miller inside guarding a stash of provisions, including whiskey. His grin was infectious. I laughed for the first time in weeks.

I wanted to do something special to honour him. Feeding his bones to the millstone, I let his dust cover the place he once loved.

6 responses to “The Miller – Friday Fictioneers”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    Grisly and humorous

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  2. Iain Kelly Avatar

    Haunting and vivd

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  3. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Macabre and yet… guarding the booze until he died. Good for him. Glad he got to stay

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  4. gahlearner Avatar
    gahlearner

    What irony, he successfully guards the booze and all for nothing. Great story, brings out the chuckle.

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  5. Edith M. Field Avatar

    A brilliant story! Sharp humour throughout and the ending was superb. Grinding the miller’s bones as a tribute to him… Wow! How did you think of that?!

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  6. wmqcolby Avatar

    I agree with Neil — grisly. And good humor, too. You nailed this one, Thom.

    “Dem bones, dem bones gonna rise …” 😉

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