Jetsam

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Jetsam

I was foundering.
Caught in his whelm.
He gave the order to jettison.
Trivial things first:
Nice to have, hard to mourn.
I’ve already forgotten what they were.
Those small, inconsequential parts of me.
Significant stock followed,
And so, too: swallowed.
He said, “Compromise keeps us alive.”
But water kept rushing
Over the bow
Pulling me down. 

When ashore I washed,
All saltwater purged,
The last thing I expected to see
Was you,
Standing proud amongst salvaged pieces of me.
Saved from the abyss.
Lovingly curated,
Cleaned, 
Restored. 
More short shipment than complete cargo.
Eager to set sail once more.

Written in response to Friday Fictioneers, a weekly 100-word writing challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-FieldsCome and play along!

7 responses to “Jetsam”

  1. CGraith Avatar
    CGraith

    Wonderful! Excellant! Fill in the blanks with all good accolades!

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  2. Dale Avatar

    This is beautifully written, Thomas.

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  3. Neil MacDonald Avatar

    A lovely confrontation

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  4. James McEwan Avatar

    Brilliant.

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  5. granonine Avatar

    Perfect poetry. A joy to read.

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  6. msjadeli Avatar

    try 2: feels like he’s passed on and gone to the next realm

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  7. Violet Lentz Avatar

    It would be a pleasure to be reacquainted with the parts of me I deemed the best.

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