You and I

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You and I

Do you remember how we would run?
Breathless, hand in hand, as if the world itself were chasing us.
Perhaps it was. 
You would know better than I.
You laughed at my shoes and bade me take them off.
I protested, fearing hidden threats:
The rock’s tooth,
The thistle’s tine.
You warned that guarding against such things risked missing all that was good:
Dew-soaked grass,
Betwixt your toes
And mine.
You promised my skin would toughen, protecting.
Now I walk through fields barefoot, remembering
The pain of your leaving. 
The tenderness of your touch.
Your absence piercing.
Your kiss divine.

Written in response to Friday Fictioneers, a weekly 100-word writing challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-FieldsCome and play along!

9 responses to “You and I”

  1. Dale Avatar

    This is beautifully written. So sad to end this way.

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  2. neilmacdon Avatar

    I wonder why she left

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  3. Edith M. Field Avatar

    Wow! This is so moving. It took my breath away. xxx

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  4. James McEwan Avatar

    Wonderful. Emotional pain lingers longer than fleeting physical sores.

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  5. The Sicilian Storyteller Avatar

    How sad. A deeply touching piece.

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  6. msjadeli Avatar

    Excellent writing that brought tears to my eyes.
    “You warned that guarding against such things risked missing all that was good:”

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  7. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Thomas,

    Poignant and well written. Such a sad ending.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  8. Michael B. Fishman Avatar

    I’m sad… but that’s not a bad thing. This was a beautiful poem.

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  9. Margaret Avatar

    Lovely thoughts in this, and true.

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