The odd one out – Friday Fictioneers

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Another late Friday Fictioneers entry from yours truly. The challenge, as always, is to write 100 words based on a weekly photo prompt chosen by our host, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Check out her blog for more information by clicking here. Thank you to all who take the time to read, like or comment.

2016-10-21

PHOTO PROMPT © Claire Fuller

The odd one out

“The pebble with the painted face?”

“Why?”

“It’s not as it should be. It draws the eye.”

“An ill-considered and naïve answer.” He replied. “This task requires great awareness and understanding. Perhaps you do not have what it takes to be my student after all.”

Suitably chastised, I begged another chance and was allowed to continue my apprenticeship. It was two years before I attempted a second answer.

“It’s the shelves. The other items are treasures found by your son, before he died. The shelves were built by you.”

A sad smile signalled his approval.

2 responses to “The odd one out – Friday Fictioneers”

  1. Dale Avatar
    Dale

    Oh, that went straight to my heart.

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  2. ellenbest24 Avatar

    It may be late but it was worth the wait. Well done. 😇

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